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Birthday Wish Chapter 1 by ~Hirokou:iconHirokou:



     It was a quiet, pleasant evening in rural America. The stars were shining bright on the deep dark blue sky, with the moon illuminating with a white-silver glow. It looked like millions of little diamonds, covering the dark sky to make almost as bright as day. And there was not a cloud in the sky that could otherwise obscure the view from any stargazer this evening. And that is what Karen Williams was doing at this moment, sitting at the top of her barn and looking at the starry skies.
     Karen Williams was lying at the top of her barn, looking up at the sky. She was too tired to go to sleep because she was a bit excited for tomorrow. For tomorrow, she is going to turn 18, signifying that she is going to be an adult now. She is too excited for that, so she decided to sneak at the top of her barn to watch the stars, hopefully that would make her sleep easier. Her jade-green eyes stared up to the skies, her creamy chocolate hair acting as a pillow for her head to rest on. Her fit, yet busty body was lying on the top beam of the barn as her slightly tanned body was glowing due to the moon’s silver light. She was wearing some pajamas, a light blue long-sleeved crew shirt and her black pajama pants with her light blue fuzzy socks covering her feet. She wasn’t such a big fan of shoes but she loves her socks, though she does need a good pair of shoes for her chores and other activities. But for some reason, she prefers to be in her socks and steer clear from any shoes.
     As Karen was stargazing, she manages to spot a shooting star from the corner of her eye. She watched the brilliant white streak go across the sky before it disappears into the darkness. Quickly, she closed her eyes and shut them hard so she can concentrate on her wish. Finally, after a few seconds of asking herself what to wish for, she finally came up with an answer.
     ~I want to be the most massive, most muscular, most powerful girl of my school…~ Karen thought to herself over and over so that she can make sure that it was her wish. Indeed, if there is anything in the world that means to her more than life, it was that she wanted to become the most muscular girl alive. She has been constantly lifting weights and regularly consumes foods that promote muscle building. However, her genetics and body structure do not allow her to gain any muscle. Even though she is one of the best-looking girls in her small town, she only desires to build muscle and nothing more. She then takes in a deep sigh as she begins to make her way inside the barn and back to her house, feeling like she can go back to sleep again.
     Later that night, Karen was in a deep sleep as it was evident with her irregular breathing and slow breaths. In her sleep, she was dreaming of herself, but as muscular goddess instead of the athletically-fit body she was accustomed to. She was clad in a two-piece bikini white with the high French curves, flexing her body to her heart’s content in front of the school body. She was smiling proudly as everyone in the cafeteria was staring at her in awe, some with a slight pang of envy. Her muscles rippled with every motion that she made as she shifted from pose to pose. She then smiled as the dream shifted to a strength contest, specifically an arm-wrestling contest with a few of the linebackers of the school. The only thing that made this different from any arm-wrestling contest is that all of the linebackers were able to use both hands, and they all went at the same time. Karen grinned, her pearly teeth as she watched all of them struggle with all of their might, but all their efforts were in vain as her mighty arm did not budge one bit. Then, in one swift motion, she swung her arm to the other side, sending all of the linebackers flying across the cafeteria and on the floor. She then flexed her winning arm, peaking at about 29 inches, as she giggled to the massive men who were lying in a heap on the ground. She kept mumbling to herself, “If only dreams come true…” in her sleep as she flexed her arm. However, she had no idea how much of her dream came true.
©2007-2010 ~Hirokou
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Author's Comments

Redid this one, so there are some slight changes in the story. No actual FMG in this installation, however I hope you enjoy the little dream sequence I set up :D


Please comment and feel free to give constructive criticism. However, if you don't like it or like the content in this story then don't comment, please!

kthnxbai!

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:iconmusclegirlchaser:
this is good. keep writing i say. :)
:iconhirokou:
thank you, though I'm re-doing it a bit. And I'm also the biggest procrastinator so I might take a while to add the new chapters.
:iconmusclegirlchaser:
me too! (tecnicaly i should have posted a new story three weeks ago...)
:icondagwam:
Muha! I definitely want to see where this is going.

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Ya RLY!

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YA WAI!!1

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Keep the story going. Maybe some growth serum, or some coach she meets has a secret formula and work out regimin that would work?!

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